Today in class we had our critiques. Here are some of the things I took away from the critiques:

  • I need to take more photos
  • When I take more photos, I need to experiment with new angels
  • I need to use more photoshopping techniques to make my images more interest (and to get higher marks)

After the critique session I spent some time quickly throwing together this image: Image

This is a basic version of what I want my final edit to look like. I’ve edited the yolk to look red like blood. I’ve made the grass dull and placed bars (a cage) over the grass, separating the eggs from natural surroundings.

By next week, after trying out some different angles, I hope to have finished my final edit of this work.


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